Neary Commented on Group 1 & Group 3 Syllabus Evaluation.
Syllabus Evaluation
Laura Black and Katelyn Neary
Ball State University
EDAC 635
November 11, 2013
After designing the
syllabus “Learning & Teaching Effectively: From the classroom to the
boardroom”, three educators from diverse backgrounds evaluated our syllabus.
Educators received a copy of the syllabus and rationale to evaluate. Evaluators
answered questions including, “What they liked about the syllabus design” and
“What should be improved and why?”
Sarah Hill, Evaluator One,
has been involved with vocational services since 1994, but is currently
employed at Cummins Behavior Health Systems as the Director of Employment
Services where she educates the community to eliminate barriers and stigma associated
with mental illness. She serves on the Indiana Mental Health Committee and is
also a liaison to State of Indiana Vocational Rehabilitation Services.
Lucas Gobel, Evaluator Two,
is currently employed with MSD Warren Township and spends his day with seventh graders
in his interactive science room. He is also the Science Olympiad Coach where
he has taken his team to the state championships for the last five years.
During his school breaks, Lucas serves as the Camp Kikthawenund Program
Director where he is responsible for all Boy Scout participants, leaders, and
volunteers.
Suzan Davis, Evaluator
Three, has been an English and Communication Instructor for over 20 years.
Currently, Suzan is an Adjunct English Communication faculty and professional
development coordinator at Ivy Tech Community College. Among her duties as a
professional development coordinator; planning working luncheons, workshops,
and seminars have all been coordinated and created by Suzan.
Please find the first evaluation
below:
Evaluator One: Sarah Hill
Occupation: Director of Employment
Services at Cummins Behavior Health Systems in Indianapolis.
1) What
do you like about the syllabus design?
Overall, I was very
impressed with the syllabus design of Learning & Teaching Effectively: From
the classroom to the boardroom. I found the design to be well thought out,
clearly defined, and very structured.
As a director of
employment and facilitator of vocational workshops, I really enjoyed how the
skill level requirements of the participants were clearly noted. This would
help me determine if the seminar is more beneficial to my clients or my staff
members.
I can’t speak enough
about the accommodations section! I especially appreciated the information on
parking because parking in Indianapolis can be exasperating and expensive. In
fact, this is sometimes a deterrent for participants. The website your group
provided seminar participants gives clear directions for parking availability
and location. From experience, I’ve been to many cities and spent over an hour
trying to find parking and that gives participants a negative impression before
the seminar ever begins!
The Pre-session questionnaire
empowers participants to be successful because there is no guess work on the
material that will be covered. Giving participants a sense of purpose and
preparedness is a great start to any learning experience. Additionally, reading
assignments are very clear and gives participants a timeline that is conducive
with busy adult schedules. Lastly, the accommodations section for people with
handicaps was a great idea. I’ve been to several seminars where people with
disabilities have needs that were overlooked because there was no way to
communicate with facilitators to set-up alternatives.
2)
What do you think should be improved? Why? How?
It was unclear to me if the seminar would allow for
course credits or not. I know there was a certificate of completion/attendance,
but if someone wanted to earn credits could it be an option? Also, I did not
see a post-seminar survey/evaluation. This is important because it allows
facilitators to know if the participants grasped the concepts being taught and
give facilitators feedback on what needs to be improved and what was executed
well.
Reflection of Evaluation One
We
were excited to have a director/facilitator evaluate our program design since
she has first-hand knowledge of how to create successful seminars and
workshops. Sarah Hill was highly complementary overall, but was particularly
impressed with our notations on skill level requirements for seminar attendees.
She mentioned that this information is usually left out of seminars she attends
and this is helpful for her to know to determine if her clients (mentally ill
adults) or staff would benefit from attending or have the skill set to do so. I
definitely agree that this aspect is crucial; I’ve been to many seminars that were
confusing and didn’t connect to me because a skill level requirement was not
mentioned on the seminar application form.
Sarah
also thought the section addressing parking in Indianapolis was especially
helpful and I agree that it was pertinent to add to our design. I think extra
details, such as parking information, are often overlooked. From a personal
stand point, I have a lot of anxiety when I travel somewhere I am not familiar
because I have no sense of direction. I agree that our parking information,
website, map, etc. allows participants to plan ahead to make travel
arrangements if necessary and ensures that participants will arrive on time.
Our parking guide takes the guesswork out of where to park and how much it will
cost, etc. We are glad that this was well received.
Mrs.
Hill was also a fan of creating clearly defined timelines to complete the
reading assignments for the seminar. I agree on this standpoint as well
(especially being a student with many assignment deadlines to complete). It is
true for every participant attending a seminar: life is incredibly busy no
matter what or who is involved. Giving deadlines lessens anxiety of participants
by giving them very realistic and manageable tasks to complete. As a working
adult, deadlines help me balance my stress levels and calm my nerves or
feelings of being overwhelmed.
Sarah
made same great suggestions that I did not think of previously. She was
concerned that our syllabus design did not have a post-session
survey/evaluation. This is an incredibly powerful tool that our group
overlooked. A post survey from participants would give us the feedback
necessary to make improvements and changes were needed. Our group will
definitely add a post-session survey on Sunday, February 2nd at
3:30pm during our farewell and dismissal portion of the session. Sarah
mentioned that post-surveys allow facilitators to assess participants
understanding of the content. We designed a syllabus that allows for frequent
check points during question and answer times as well as group discussions, but
a post-survey would encompass the entire program. This would give us a clear
view of what participants found most helpful and what they retained over the
course of our program.
Sarah
also mentioned that it was unclear whether or not course attendees would get
credits. This is something that was originally overlooked by the creators of
the syllabus. The possibility of offering ‘continuing education’ credits might
make attendance to the seminar more attractive. Contacting the proper personnel
to get accreditation for the credits could be difficult but definitely worth
it; furthermore, clearly stating the skill level requirements for attendees.
The second
syllabus evaluation can be found below:
Evaluator Two: Lucas Gobel
Occupation: 7th
Grade Science Teacher, Science Olympiad Coach, Camp Kikthawenund Program
Director
1.) What
do you like about the syllabus design?
I
really like how the expectations are laid out in the participants’ handouts. It
had every answer to every question I would have. I also liked the thought that
was put into the set-up with a combination of instructor directed, group
directed, and then participant directed activities. I found the syllabus well-researched
in teaching philosophy. The variety of activities would make a more valuable
learning experience to anyone that participated. All research points to small
group activities being effective.
2.) What
do you think should be improved? Why? How?
While
the syllabus does a great job of setting up expectations, I could not find the
value of taking said seminar in any of the participant materials. Why should I
take this? What value will this serve me in my company or classroom? Why should
I attend this seminar? These questions could be answered up front with the description
and objectives. I am always cautious of participant lead assignments. Even
though they are valuable, if the effort isn't put forth by the participants of
the whole group then everyone suffers (including the instructor).
Reflection of Evaluator Two
Evaluator
two, Lucas, had very similar observations as Sarah (Evaluator One) which shows
how consistent the positives are as well as the negatives. Lucas stated that he
was very impressed by the expectations stated in the participant handbook. Also
noted by Lucas was the fact that every answer to any question he had was
answered in that handbook. The set-up of the workshop was appreciated because
of the range of instructor, group, and participant directed activities. Lucas
thought the syllabus was well researched; furthermore, leading to us to the
most effective instructional methods for adults.
Lucas
felt that there were some areas of improvement in our syllabus. The value of
taking the seminar was a major concern of evaluator two; therefore, he felt
that the value needed to be mentioned somewhere in participant materials. The
evaluator was also weary of using participant led assignments in the workshop.
The evaluator cautioned that if effort is not made by participants the entire
group and instructor are affected negatively and takeaways from the workshop
could be minimized. The syllabus creators agree that there is a risk when using
participant led assignments, but given the required skill and experience level
hopefully participation is not minimal.
Please
find the third evaluation below:
Evaluator Three:
Suzan Davis
Occupation:
Technical and grammatical recommendations by Suzan Davis, Adjunct English and
Communication facility and Professional Development Coordinator at Ivy Tech
Community College.
Evaluator Three
Suggestions: Throughout the syllabus: Observe ten
and under rule, except for times or measurements, write out numbers under ten,
as this is an academic setting
Make
times consistent: You have 8:00 AM to 4:00 PM on one line and 8am to 4 pm on
three. Make it all the same.
It
is very good you put not only the day of the week, but also AM and PM because one
can never assume, even when it seems obvious.
Under
Skill Level for attendees:
Second
line: Interest and/or experience in using “real life case study. Make it a real life case study. OR write case
studies.
Third
line: At least 5 years’ experience as an instructor or fascinator at particular
university. What do you mean by particular? Does this mean any university? The
first line already mentions Indiana professors or instructors so I am confused
by this.
The
Seminar Format section clearly not only shows the participants what to expect,
but the range of activities makes the seminar attract to numerous learning
styles. Recommendation: last sentence: “arrive with time to check in, collect
name tags, etc….this can be interpreted many ways. Instead: Check in 15 to 30
minutes before the first seminar at 8 AM.
Attendance:
Third sentence needs a complete rewrite. It is a fragment and does not express
a complete thought.
It
is very nice that guests can walk via enclosed walkways from the convention
center to their hotels. This is important information, often overlooked.
Parking
The interactive map is a fantastic addition. The last time I was in downtown
Indy, I was asked where hotels were located compared to meeting places three
times in three minutes. This will help guests envision where they are going.
The
early assignments and time lines help prepare participants to maximize the
experience, and for their fascinators to do a better job.
Overview: The
clear headings help readers navigate thought the syllabus. It appears to cover
all the important points of the seminar day by day, plus prior preparations
needed, navigational tidbits that will make it easier for out-of-town
participants, and post seminar requirements. Based on the syllabus, it is an
event I would love to attend myself.
Reflection
of Evaluation Three
Evaluator
three provided great suggestions as well as grammatical fixations that went
unnoticed by the syllabus creators. Even though Evaluator Three used a
different format in comparison to the other evaluations, there were many great
acknowledgements made. Numerous recommendations were provided some small and
some large. One suggestion included making the time 8:00 AM consistent
throughout the schedule, rather than have 8 AM in some places. This seems like
a very small detail but it could confuse someone and it will make the spacing
more consistent. Suzan examined the syllabus thoroughly and found some additional
areas that can be improved. One area in the syllabus is titled, “Skill level
requirement for seminar attendees”, Suzan pointed out that the wording used
when describing the skill level for attendees was confusing. After an
additional review- I agree that the verbiage isn’t the most effective and could
be better. Another suggestion for that section calls for further clarification
determine what the syllabus creators mean by attendees required to have five years’
experience from a particular university. The syllabus writers meant that
attendees need consecutive years of teaching experience from a single
university; furthermore, compared to an individual that might have taught for
two years at an elementary school, two years at a high school, and then one
year at a university. Suzan makes a good point to change the phrasing of this
to make it clear to the attendees of what the skill level requirements are. Under
the, “Seminar Format” section there could be more a description to define how
much time in advance workshop attendees should arrive to check-in before the
seminar begins. Suzan suggested putting an actual amount of time, not just
‘arrive with time to check in’ – how it is stated in the syllabus presently.
She suggested putting 15 to 30 minutes in the syllabus; furthermore, this will
make expectations of attendees clear and concise.
Many
positives were highlighted by Suzan throughout her evaluation of the syllabus.
She notes how important it is to put AM and PM on the end of any time. I agree
and nothing is ever ‘common sense’ when it comes to times of meetings
especially for those from a different time zone. Another feature Suzan
appreciated was the seminar format and how it provided a clear and concise
expectation for workshop attendees. The range of learning styles that will be
reached by using the various instructor and attendees involvement will provide
many learning opportunities to various learning styles all at one workshop. As
evaluator one noted, the parking is a wonderful addition to the syllabus and
can really help with attendees traveling. After hearing all the feedback about
parking, proper documentation has been made in the syllabus creator’s memory to
always consider parking prior to any event. Parking can seem like a ‘given’,
but it individuals don’t have places to park close by, the chance of them
attending the event is decreased and their approval and over all feeling about
the event is diminished and replaced with frustration from a long walk,
expensive parking ticket, or worse lost car. Suzan also mentioned the benefit
of having the assignment due dates early for the participants. I agree because
the participants can be aware of the topic that will be discussed on each day
ahead of time. Rather than not having any idea what is going on that day.
Overall, Suzan said the syllabus was very thorough and easy to navigate. She
said she enjoyed reading it so much she would like to attend the “Learning
& Teaching Effectively: From the classroom to the boardroom” workshop!
CONCLUSION
All
three evaluators did a great job assessing, “Learning & Teaching
Effectively: From the classroom to the boardroom” syllabus design. Each
evaluator provided great recommendations and suggestions to strengthen our
workshop. The evaluators come from various backgrounds and each provided a
little different view of the syllabus; furthermore, this gave our team a more
well-rounded assessment. The evaluators highlighted the strong and weak
components of our syllabus design and all suggestions will be considered to
improve our design. The consistency of the comments verified that the syllabus
could be successful in practice. The input from the various educators enhanced
the importance and practice of the workshop, while providing great suggestions
for improvement. The syllabus creators would like to give much appreciation to
all the evaluators and their helpful recommendations.
Team Member Contributions:
Laura: Recruited Evaluator 1 & 2, Provided reflection of Evaluator One, Wrote background description for Evaluator 1 & 2, edited and revised
Katelyn: Recruited Evaluator 3, Provided reflection of Evalation 2 & 3, Wrote background for Evalutor 3, conclusion, editted
I enjoyed Sarah Hill’s enthusiastic evaluation and specific positive points! I agree that accommodations are an important feature of your syllabus – especially for downtown areas! I can take some tips from the areas of improvement as well – taking a post seminar survey is a good way to evaluate our program and make improvements. Your second evaluator made a good point in the advantage of clarifying why someone should attend. As I noted in another response, it’s interesting to see the different personality and learning styles show in what the evaluator consider important. Your third evaluated is very detailed oriented!
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea of including parking information in your program! This can be an important piece of information when I am not familiar with the area. I think all of your evaluators did a fantastic job on evaluating your syllabus. Sarah Hills gave an advise about giving post seminar survey to improve the program. Suzan Davis also pointed out some of wording might be confusing for attendees. I believe these suggestions definitely can help you on final project
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